add additional changes after suggestions from Josh

diff --git a/762194_automatic_switch_to_systemd/draft_dla.txt b/762194_automatic_switch_to_systemd/draft_dla.txt
index ffcfc7f127a914e21260a127ea9b539fa71b0c74..695a3c629079a02a9ee387569c0baeace90377a0 100644 (file)
--- a/762194_automatic_switch_to_systemd/draft_dla.txt
+++ b/762194_automatic_switch_to_systemd/draft_dla.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-In #762194, the Technical Committee was asked to use its power under
-§6.1.4 to override the transition plan of the init package maintainers
-to have both new installs and upgrades use systemd by default.
+In #762194, the Technical Committee was asked to consider the
+transition plan of the init package maintainers to have both new
+installs and upgrades use systemd by default.
 
 1. The CTTE determined in #727708 that systemd should be the default
    init system in Debian. 
@@ -10,14 +10,16 @@ to have both new installs and upgrades use systemd by default.
    migrating to systemd as the default init system on both installs
    and new upgrades.
 
-3. The init package currently in jessie implements this transition.
+3. The init package (and other related packages) currently in jessie
+   implement this transition.
 
 ==OPTION A==
 
 Using its power under §6.1.5 to make statements:
 
 3. The CTTE affirms the decision of the init system package
-   maintainers to transition to systemd by default.
+   maintainers to transition to systemd by default on upgrades and to
+   install systemd by default on new installs.
 
 4. The CTTE appreciates the effort of Debian contributors to mitigate
    any issues with the transition by:
@@ -29,7 +31,7 @@ Using its power under §6.1.5 to make statements:
    are unsupported in systemd. (#761063)
 
    c) Providing documentation on how to remain with sysvinit on
-   upgrades and swithc to sysvinit upon installation.
+   upgrades and switch to sysvinit upon installation.
 
    d) Numerous bug reports and fixes by contributors who have tested
    the systemd migration in their configurations.