add additional changes after suggestions from Josh

diff --git a/762194_automatic_switch_to_systemd/draft_dla.txt b/762194_automatic_switch_to_systemd/draft_dla.txt
index ffcfc7f127a914e21260a127ea9b539fa71b0c74..695a3c629079a02a9ee387569c0baeace90377a0 100644 (file)
--- a/762194_automatic_switch_to_systemd/draft_dla.txt
+++ b/762194_automatic_switch_to_systemd/draft_dla.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-In #762194, the Technical Committee was asked to use its power under
-§6.1.4 to override the transition plan of the init package maintainers
-to have both new installs and upgrades use systemd by default.
+In #762194, the Technical Committee was asked to consider the
+transition plan of the init package maintainers to have both new
+installs and upgrades use systemd by default.

 
 1. The CTTE determined in #727708 that systemd should be the default
    init system in Debian. 
 
 1. The CTTE determined in #727708 that systemd should be the default
    init system in Debian. 


@@ -10,14 +10,16 @@ to have both new installs and upgrades use systemd by default.
    migrating to systemd as the default init system on both installs
    and new upgrades.
 
    migrating to systemd as the default init system on both installs
    and new upgrades.
 

-3. The init package currently in jessie implements this transition.
+3. The init package (and other related packages) currently in jessie
+   implement this transition.

 
 ==OPTION A==
 
 Using its power under §6.1.5 to make statements:
 
 3. The CTTE affirms the decision of the init system package
 
 ==OPTION A==
 
 Using its power under §6.1.5 to make statements:
 
 3. The CTTE affirms the decision of the init system package

-   maintainers to transition to systemd by default.
+   maintainers to transition to systemd by default on upgrades and to
+   install systemd by default on new installs.

 
 4. The CTTE appreciates the effort of Debian contributors to mitigate
    any issues with the transition by:
 
 4. The CTTE appreciates the effort of Debian contributors to mitigate
    any issues with the transition by:


@@ -29,7 +31,7 @@ Using its power under §6.1.5 to make statements:
    are unsupported in systemd. (#761063)
 
    c) Providing documentation on how to remain with sysvinit on
    are unsupported in systemd. (#761063)
 
    c) Providing documentation on how to remain with sysvinit on

-   upgrades and swithc to sysvinit upon installation.
+   upgrades and switch to sysvinit upon installation.

 
    d) Numerous bug reports and fixes by contributors who have tested
    the systemd migration in their configurations.
 
    d) Numerous bug reports and fixes by contributors who have tested
    the systemd migration in their configurations.