add changes suggested by josh triplett

diff --git a/762194_automatic_switch_to_systemd/draft_dla.txt b/762194_automatic_switch_to_systemd/draft_dla.txt
index fd745b369e50b572f514cbb59d9a0d59f800a199..ffcfc7f127a914e21260a127ea9b539fa71b0c74 100644 (file)
--- a/762194_automatic_switch_to_systemd/draft_dla.txt
+++ b/762194_automatic_switch_to_systemd/draft_dla.txt
@@ -1,14 +1,16 @@
 In #762194, the Technical Committee was asked to use its power under
-§6.1.4 to override the decision of the init package maintainers to
-depend on systemd-sysv as the first alternative dependency, thus
-ensuring both new installs and upgrades use systemd by default.
+§6.1.4 to override the transition plan of the init package maintainers
+to have both new installs and upgrades use systemd by default.
 
 1. The CTTE determined in #727708 that systemd should be the default
    init system in Debian. 
 
-2. In <87mwc9gfsw.fsf@xoog.err.no>[1], the maintainers of the init
-   package announced their transition plan for migrating to systemd as
-   the default init system on both installs and new upgrades.
+2. In https://lists.debian.org/87mwc9gfsw.fsf@xoog.err.no, the
+   maintainers of the init package announced their transition plan for
+   migrating to systemd as the default init system on both installs
+   and new upgrades.
+
+3. The init package currently in jessie implements this transition.
 
 ==OPTION A==
 
@@ -23,15 +25,15 @@ Using its power under §6.1.5 to make statements:
    a) Providing a fallback boot entry for sysvinit when systemd is the
    default init in grub (#757298)
 
-   b) Developing a mechanism to warn on non-standard inittab
-   configurations which are unsupported in systemd.
+   b) Developing a mechanism to warn on inittab configurations which
+   are unsupported in systemd. (#761063)
 
-   c) Providing documentation on how to opt to remain with sysvinit on
-   both initial installs and upgrades.
+   c) Providing documentation on how to remain with sysvinit on
+   upgrades and swithc to sysvinit upon installation.
 
    d) Numerous bug reports and fixes by contributors who have tested
    the systemd migration in their configurations.
 
-
-
-1: https://lists.debian.org/87mwc9gfsw.fsf@xoog.err.no
+5. The CTTE advises (without overriding any Debian contributor,
+   maintainer, or team) that any such mitigations should be included
+   in jessie, to ensure a smooth transition for Debian users.