Web: Updated Frescobaldi in introduction.itexi

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--- a/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
+++ b/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ documentation explaining how to use these features -- we can
 achieve our goal with only a fraction of the individual effort.
 
 @item
-@qq{Gift culture}: the Free Software (or @qq{Open Source})
+@qq{Gift culture}: the Free Software
 movement has created many great software projects, such as
 @uref{http://kernel.org/, GNU/Linux},
 @uref{http://www.getfirefox.com/, Mozilla Firefox}, and
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ benefitted from these projects, some developers want to @qq{give
 back} to the community.
 
 @item
-Work experience: contributing to open-source projects is a great way to
+Work experience: contributing to free software projects is a great way to
 practice programming, documentation writing, documentation translation,
 or design.  This experience has helped some developers gain job offers
 or scholarships.
@@ -519,11 +519,11 @@ New Music Ensemble}.
 
 @item
 @emph{Anonymous Student Compliment or Complaint}, by
-@uref{http:www.mikesolomon.org, Mike Solomon}, winner chosen from among
+@uref{http://www.mikesolomon.org, Mike Solomon}, winner chosen from among
 172 entries from 22 countries of the
 @uref{http://leftcoastensemble.org/contest, 2011 Left Coast Composition Contest}.
 Other works include, Norman (age 1) for clarinet solo, performed at the
-@uref{emu.music.ufl.edu/fems_concerts.html, University of Florida}'s
+@uref{http://emu.music.ufl.edu/fems_concerts.html, University of Florida}'s
 Electroacoustic Music Festival (FEMF), October 2010.
 
 @item
@@ -1077,11 +1077,9 @@ viewer with advanced point-and-click support.
 
 @uref{http://www.frescobaldi.org}
 
-Frescobaldi is a dedicated LilyPond music and text editor with a
-built-in PDF previewer, a powerful score wizard and many editing
-features.  It is built on top of the KDE4 libraries and runs
-currently on all flavours of Linux and other UNIX-like operating
-systems.
+Frescobaldi is lightweight, yet powerful LilyPond music and text editor
+with a built-in PDF viewer.  It is easy to use and will run on all major
+operating systems (Linux, Mac OS X and Windows).
 
 @divEnd