Fix broken example

[lilypond.git] / Documentation / user / tweaks.itely

diff --git a/Documentation/user/tweaks.itely b/Documentation/user/tweaks.itely
index 57bb2775d5b09a04eb5fd1da55c0a0ad76d17842..596cdc1e5c80f2015c088ab001192786019ec4fe 100644 (file)
--- a/Documentation/user/tweaks.itely
+++ b/Documentation/user/tweaks.itely
@@ -3128,8 +3128,10 @@ have to be absolutely correct.  If the same overrides are to be
 used many times it may be worth defining variables to hold them.
 Suppose we wish to emphasize certain words in lyrics by printing
 them in bold italics.  The @code{\italic} and @code{\bold}
-commands do not work within lyrics so we must instead use the
-following @code{\override} and @code{\revert} commands:
+commands only work within lyrics if they are also embedded in
+@code{\markup}, which makes them tedious to enter, so as an
+alternative can we instead use the @code{\override} and 
+@code{\revert} commands?
 
 @example
 @code{\override Lyrics . LyricText #'font-shape = #'italic}
@@ -3139,9 +3141,11 @@ following @code{\override} and @code{\revert} commands:
 @code{\revert Lyrics . LyricText #'font-series}
 @end example
 
-These would be extremely tedious to enter if there were many words
-requiring emphasis.  So instead we define these as two variables,
-and use them as follows:
+These would also be extremely tedious to enter if there were many
+words requiring emphasis.  So instead we define these as two
+variables, and use them as follows, although normally we would
+perhaps choose shorter names for the variables to make them
+quicker to type:
 
 @lilypond[quote,verbatim]
 emphasize = {
@@ -3169,10 +3173,10 @@ VerseFour  = \lyricmode { O | \emphasize Tri -- ni -- ty \normal of | love and p
       \clef "treble"
       \new Voice = "Soprano"  { \voiceOne \global \SopranoMusic }
       \new Voice = "Alto" { \voiceTwo \AltoMusic }
-      \new Lyrics \lyricsto "Sop" { \VerseOne   }
-      \new Lyrics \lyricsto "Sop" { \VerseTwo   }
-      \new Lyrics \lyricsto "Sop" { \VerseThree }
-      \new Lyrics \lyricsto "Sop" { \VerseFour  }
+      \new Lyrics \lyricsto "Soprano" { \VerseOne   }
+      \new Lyrics \lyricsto "Soprano" { \VerseTwo   }
+      \new Lyrics \lyricsto "Soprano" { \VerseThree }
+      \new Lyrics \lyricsto "Soprano" { \VerseFour  }
     >>
     \new Staff <<
       \clef "bass"