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[lilypond.git] / Documentation / user / repeats.itely

diff --git a/Documentation/user/repeats.itely b/Documentation/user/repeats.itely
index 05719dd24152cf5ec0de6a32f110a178a4915aaa..f862ec53097afb3e27dc7404945afb6ee6e3476b 100644 (file)
--- a/Documentation/user/repeats.itely
+++ b/Documentation/user/repeats.itely
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ exist for repetitions. LilyPond supports the following kinds of repeats:
 The repeated music is not written out but enclosed between repeat bar
 lines.  If the repeat is at the beginning of a piece, a repeat bar
 line is only printed at the end. Alternative endings (volte) are
-printed, left to right with brackets.  This is the standard notation
+printed left to right with brackets.  This is the standard notation
 for repeats with alternatives.
 
 @item unfold
@@ -32,7 +32,8 @@ specified by @var{repeatcount}.  This is useful when
 entering repetitious music. 
 
 @item percent
-These are beat or measure repeats.  They look like percent signs.
+These are beat or measure repeats.  They look like single slashes or
+percent signs.
 
 @item tremolo
 This is used to write tremolo beams.
@@ -98,7 +99,7 @@ c1
 @end lilypond
 
 
-Repeats with upbeats:
+Repeats with upbeats can be entered in two ways:
 
 @lilypond[quote,ragged-right,fragment,verbatim,relative=2]
 \new Staff {
@@ -142,10 +143,10 @@ c1
 
 @snippets
 
-@lilypondfile[verbatim,lilyquote,ragged-right,texidoc]
+@lilypondfile[verbatim,lilyquote,ragged-right,texidoc,doctitle]
 {shortening-volta-brackets.ly}
 
-@lilypondfile[verbatim,lilyquote,ragged-right,texidoc]
+@lilypondfile[verbatim,lilyquote,ragged-right,texidoc,doctitle]
 {adding-volta-brackets-to-additional-staves.ly}
 
 
@@ -195,7 +196,7 @@ For clarity, it is advisable to use braces in such situations.
 Timing information is not remembered at the start of an alternative,
 so after a repeat timing information must be reset by hand; for
 example, by setting @code{Score.measurePosition} or entering
-@code{\partial}.  Similarly, slurs or ties are also not repeated.
+@code{\partial}.  Similarly, slurs are also not repeated.
 
 
 
@@ -365,6 +366,8 @@ durations, are supported.
 
 @seealso
 
+Music Glossary: @rglos{percent repeat}, @rglos{simile}.
+
 Snippets: @rlsr{Repeats}.
 
 Internals Reference: @rinternals{RepeatSlash},
@@ -438,12 +441,4 @@ into the MIDI output.
 
 @seealso
 
-Notation Reference: @ref{Tremolo repeats}.
-
-Internals Reference: @rinternals{Beam}, @rinternals{StemTremolo}.
-
-Snippets: @rlsr{Repeats}.
-
-Elsewhere: @rinternals{StemTremolo}.
-
-
+@c Notation Reference: @re