2004-11-10 Andreas Scherer <andreas_mutopia@freenet.de>

[lilypond.git] / Documentation / user / preface.itely

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@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ printing music (to be precise, it was MPP, a preprocessor for
 MusiXTeX).  As it happened, Han-Wen accidentally wanted to print out
 some parts from a score, so he started looking at the software, and he
 quickly got hooked.  It was decided that MPP was a dead end.  After
-lots of philosophizing and heated email exchanges Han-Wen started
+lots of philosophizing and heated email exchanges, Han-Wen started
 LilyPond in 1996.  This time, Jan got sucked into Han-Wen's new
 project.
 
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ some days it feels like plodding through a morass of bugs.
 Nevertheless, it has become a part of our life, and we keep doing it.
 Probably the most important motivation is that our program actually
 does something useful for people.  When we browse around the net we
-find many people that use LilyPond, and produce impressive pieces of
+find many people who use LilyPond, and produce impressive pieces of
 sheet music.  Seeing that feels unreal, but in a very pleasant way.
 
 Our users not only give us good vibes by using our program, many of
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ them also help us by giving suggestions and sending bug reports, so we
 would like to thank all users that sent us bug reports, gave
 suggestions or contributed in any other way to LilyPond.
 
-Playing and printing music is more than nice analogy.  Programming
+Playing and printing music is more than a nice analogy.  Programming
 together is a lot of fun, and helping people is deeply satisfying, but
 ultimately, working on LilyPond is a way to express our deep love for
 music.  May it help you create lots of beautiful music!