* Another grand 2003 update.

[lilypond.git] / Documentation / user / lilypond.tely

diff --git a/Documentation/user/lilypond.tely b/Documentation/user/lilypond.tely
index c696741df34e0e634a3670df455fca5c78a55750..69f48c53cc885bf8faf97c024fbbd9d381ff5f44 100644 (file)
--- a/Documentation/user/lilypond.tely
+++ b/Documentation/user/lilypond.tely
@@ -37,7 +37,27 @@ Distributions will want to install lilypond.info doing:
 @omflanguage English
 @end ignore
 
+@c don't remove this comment.
 
+@ignore
+
+HINTS FOR STYLE
+
+* don't refer to LilyPond in the text. The reader knows what the
+manual is about
+
+* don't explicitly refer to the reader/user.  There is no one else
+besides the reader and the writer.
+
+* don't use abbreviations (don't, won't, etc.)
+
+* avoid fluff (``Notice that,'' ``as you can see,'' ``Currently,'') 
+
+* avoid long stretches of input code. Noone is go to read  them in
+print. Instead refer to an example input file (@inputfileref), these
+are clickable in HTML.
+
+@end ignore
 
 @ifhtml
 This document is also available in @uref{../lilypond.ps.gz,gzipped
@@ -48,10 +68,14 @@ PostScript} and @uref{../lilypond.pdf,PDF}.
 @titlepage
 @title GNU LilyPond
 @subtitle The music typesetter
-@author    
+@author Han-Wen Nienhuys
+@author Jan Nieuwenhuizen
+@author J@"{u}gen Reuter
+@author Rune Zedeler
 
 
-Copyright @copyright{} 1999--2002 by the authors
+
+Copyright @copyright{} 1999--2003 by the authors
 
   Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this document
   under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.1
@@ -63,12 +87,11 @@ Copyright @copyright{} 1999--2002 by the authors
 
 @end titlepage
 
-@c Han-Wen Nienhuys, Jan Nieuwenhuizen, Adrian Mariano, Tom Cato Amundsen.
 
 @ifnottex
 This file documents GNU LilyPond.
 
-Copyright 1999-2002 by the authors
+Copyright 1999--2003 by the authors
 
   Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this document
   under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.1
@@ -86,7 +109,7 @@ Copyright 1999-2002 by the authors
 
 @chapter GNU LilyPond --- The music typesetter
 
-This is the user manual for GNU LilyPond 1.7.14.
+This is the user manual for GNU LilyPond 1.7.16.
 
 @cindex web site
 
@@ -104,11 +127,10 @@ this and other documentation.
 * Advanced Topics::                How it all works.
 * Invoking LilyPond::              Operation.
 * Converting from other formats::  Converting to lilypond source format.
-* Integrating text and music with lilypond-book::
-                                   The lilypond-book manual.
+* lilypond-book manual::           Integrating text and music with lilypond-book.
 * Literature::                     Additional reading material.
 * Index::                          Unified index.
-* Refman appendix::                
+* Reference manual details::                
 * GNU Free Documentation License:: FDL.
 @end menu
 @end ifnottex
@@ -121,11 +143,11 @@ this and other documentation.
 @mbinclude introduction.itely 
 @mbinclude tutorial.itely
 @mbinclude refman.itely
+@mbinclude literature.itely
 @mbinclude internals.itely
 @mbinclude invoking.itexi
 @mbinclude lilypond-book.itely
 @mbinclude converters.itely
-@mbinclude literature.itely
 
 
 @c FIXME: Index has two alphabetically sorted lists @code vs plain?