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@subheading Where now?
-Still not convinced? Read about some of our users'
-@ref{Productions} and sheet music. If you've already decided to
-try LilyPond, first read about our @ref{Text input}.
-
-FIXME: rewrite for Background.
+Still not convinced? Read our extensive essay about our engraving
+philosophy in @ref{Background}. If you've already decided to try
+LilyPond, first read about our @ref{Text input}.
@divEnd
@subheading Background essay
We have an extensive essay describing computational aesthetics:
-the art of creating beauty with a computer. FIXME blah blah.
-
-FIXME: simplify the verbosity below.
+the art of creating beauty with a computer.
If you just want a quick introduction to LilyPond, the essay might
be too much material to read. If you would like to read it now,
please progress to @ref{Essay}.
-
@divEnd
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command completion, and pre-made templates. Other programs
actually provide a GUI which allows direct manipulation of a
graphical score. For more information, see our documentation
-about @@ref@{FIXME alternate editing environments@}.
+about @ref{Alternate input}.
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@subheading Where now?
-You are now ready to @ref{Download, Download LilyPond}.
+You are now ready to @ref{Download, Download LilyPond}. Still not
+convinced? Read about easier editing environments in
+@ref{Alternate input}.
-Still not convinced? Many composers, musicians, and conductors
-have learned how to write music in our input format. Experienced
-users even report that they can enter a full score in LilyPond
-faster than with a piano keyboard or mouse+GUI! Perhaps you would
-like to review the @ref{Features}, @ref{Examples}, or
-@ref{Freedom} that LilyPond provides, or read about users'
-@ref{Productions} and @ref{Testimonials}. In addition, our
-approach to the computational aesthetics of classical engraving is
-explained in our @ref{Background}. FIXME
@divEnd
@divEnd
+
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+@subheading Where now?
+
+You are now ready to @ref{Download, Download LilyPond}.
+
+Still not convinced? Many composers, musicians, and conductors
+have learned how to write music in our input format. Experienced
+users even report that they can enter a full score in LilyPond
+faster than with a piano keyboard or mouse+GUI! Perhaps you would
+like to review the @ref{Features}, @ref{Examples}, or the
+@ref{Freedom} that LilyPond provides, or read about users'
+@ref{Productions} and @ref{Testimonials}. In addition, our
+approach to the computational aesthetics of classical engraving is
+explained in our @ref{Background}.
+
+
@subheading Legalese
@divClass{legal}