-@c FIXME: sorry Trevor, I know this is a complete mess. :(
-
-But You should be aware, that some percussion sounds cannot be
-reached via the @code{DrumStaff} context. Pitched percussion
-sounds, like
-Xylophone, Marimaphone, Vibraphone, Timpani, etc. are treated like
-"normal" instruments and You should input music for these
-instruments in a @code{Staff} context, not in a @code{DrumStaff}
-context.
-Too make it more complicated:
-some non pitched percussion sounds of the general midi standard,
-like "melodic-tom", "taiko-drum" "synth drum", etc. cannot
-be reached via midi-channel 10, so You should also use for them a
-@code{ Staff} context, with "normal" pitches. And, last but not
-least,
-it should be mentioned, that there are lots of percussion
-instruments, which are note part of the general midi standard.
-If You want to write for e.g. castanets, You have to find a
-substitution for this sound (or have a good sampler).
-But let us forget for this moment the limitations of midi and let
-us go on with some more examples, that show You how to write
-for percussion instruments with Lilypond:
-
-@c (no, seriously, there was no example here. I didn't just forget
-@c to copy it. -gp)
+Percussion instruments are generally notated in a @code{DrumStaff}
+context and when notated in this way they are outputted correctly
+to MIDI channel@tie{}10, but some pitched percussion instruments,
+like the xylophone, marimba, vibraphone, timpani, etc., are
+treated like @qq{normal} instruments and music for these instruments
+should be entered in a normal @code{Staff} context, not a
+@code{DrumStaff} context, to obtain the correct MIDI output.
+
+Some non-pitched percussion sounds included in the general MIDI
+standard, like melodic tom, taiko drum, synth drum, etc., cannot
+be reached via MIDI channel@tie{}10, so the notation for such
+instruments should also be entered in a normal @code{Staff}
+context, using suitable normal pitches.