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diff --git a/Documentation/contributor/introduction.itexi b/Documentation/contributor/introduction.itexi
index 167579bc9271890e89297219eeb70816a0f307d4..3aa9380fd8e67ef3e90d1c7ba31ba38258092b47 100644 (file)
--- a/Documentation/contributor/introduction.itexi
+++ b/Documentation/contributor/introduction.itexi
@@ -162,10 +162,9 @@ At the @qq{Prepare disk space} stage, do not be afraid to select
 @emph{virtual disk}, not your machine's actual hard drive.
 
 @item
 @emph{virtual disk}, not your machine's actual hard drive.
 
 @item

-After restarting your system, if you see the ISOLINUX @code{boot:}
-prompt again, go to
-@w{Devices@arrow{}CD/DVD Devices@arrow{}} and @emph{de-select}
-the @q{lilybuntu2.iso} option, then reboot.
+When prompted to remove the installation CD, go to
+@clicksequence{Devices @click{} CD/DVD Devices} and de-select
+@file{lilybuntu2.iso}.

 
 @end itemize
 
 
 @end itemize
 


@@ -173,7 +172,7 @@ the @q{lilybuntu2.iso} option, then reboot.
 The latest version of lilybuntu is based on Ubuntu 10.04.1; if you
 encounter any difficulties installing it, search for one of the
 many tutorials for installing that particular version of Ubuntu as
 The latest version of lilybuntu is based on Ubuntu 10.04.1; if you
 encounter any difficulties installing it, search for one of the
 many tutorials for installing that particular version of Ubuntu as

-a client operating system.
+a guest operating system.

 }
 
 @item
 }
 
 @item


@@ -181,33 +180,37 @@ Do any extra configuration for your virtualization software.
 
 VirtualBox has extra @qq{guest additions} which can make the
 virtualization easier to use (full-screen, easy file sharing
 
 VirtualBox has extra @qq{guest additions} which can make the
 virtualization easier to use (full-screen, easy file sharing

-between host and client operating systems, shared clipboards,
-etc).
+between host and guest operating systems, shared clipboards, etc).

 
 @enumerate
 
 @item
 
 @enumerate
 
 @item

-From the @code{Devices} menu of VirtualBox, select @code{Install
-Guest Additions...}.
+In @emph{VirtualBox}, select @clicksequence{Devices @click{}
+Install Guest Additions...}.

 
 @item
 
 @item

-From the @code{Places} menu of Ubuntu, select
-@code{VBOXADDITIONS_}.  A file-system window will open.
+In @emph{Ubuntu}, select @clicksequence{Places @click{}
+VBOXADDITIONS_}.  A file-system window will open.

 
 @item
 Double-click on the @file{autorun.sh} file, then select @qq{Run in
 Terminal}, and enter your password when prompted.
 
 @item
 
 @item
 Double-click on the @file{autorun.sh} file, then select @qq{Run in
 Terminal}, and enter your password when prompted.
 
 @item

-Once the script is finished, reboot your Virtual Machine to
-complete the installation.
+Once the script is finished, restart Ubuntu to complete the
+installation.
+
+@item
+Set up any additional features, such as @q{Shared Folders} between
+your main operating system and ubuntu.  Consult external
+documentation for this step.

 
 @advanced{If you do any kernel upgrades, you may need to re-run
 these VBOXADDITIONS instructions.}
 
 @end enumerate
 
 
 @advanced{If you do any kernel upgrades, you may need to re-run
 these VBOXADDITIONS instructions.}
 
 @end enumerate
 

-If you use other virutalization software, then follow the normal
+If you use other virtualization software, then follow the normal

 procedures for your virtualization software with Ubuntu as the
 client.
 
 procedures for your virtualization software with Ubuntu as the
 client.
 


@@ -227,13 +230,13 @@ couple of @qq{introduction to Ubuntu} webpages.
 One particular change from Windows and MacOS X is that most
 software should be installed with your @qq{package manager}; this
 vastly simplifies the process of installing and configuring
 One particular change from Windows and MacOS X is that most
 software should be installed with your @qq{package manager}; this
 vastly simplifies the process of installing and configuring

-software.  Go to
-@w{System@arrow{}Administration@arrow{}Synaptic Package Manager}.
+software.  Go to @clicksequence{System @click{} Administration
+@click{} Synaptic Package Manager}.

 
 @item
 The rest of this manual assumes that you are using the
 
 @item
 The rest of this manual assumes that you are using the

-command-line; go to
-@w{Applications@arrow{}Accessories@arrow{}Terminal}.
+command-line; go to @clicksequence{Applications @click{}
+Accessories @click{} Terminal}.

 
 @end itemize
 
 
 @end itemize