Pass over blog post

diff --git a/sandbox/2013-05-31_matlab_64bit_on_32bit.rst b/sandbox/2013-05-31_matlab_64bit_on_32bit.rst
index b71d01afc377135fabedbe6435e6d3c74c5d0f7a..1041ee2db6af7549dade071882dafe1416110b7e 100644 (file)
--- a/sandbox/2013-05-31_matlab_64bit_on_32bit.rst
+++ b/sandbox/2013-05-31_matlab_64bit_on_32bit.rst
@@ -7,24 +7,23 @@
 Running 64bit Matlab on 32bit host OS
 =====================================
 
-Some of you have been impacted by the recent decision of Mathworks to
+Some of you have experienced problems due the recent move of Mathworks to
 drop 32-bit Linux builds of their products (i.e. Matlab R2013a and
-co.).  So that you do not feel particularly bad about it -- this is
-not a novel move by Mathworks.  In 1998 PowerPC builds for Macs were
-abandoned as well, bringing a `furious reaction
+co.). Please note that this is not the first time Mathworks values its own
+costs higher than the benefits of a few scientists.  In 1998 PowerPC builds
+for Macs were abandoned, causing a `furious reaction
 <http://www.mathworks.com/matlabcentral/newsreader/view_thread/5910>`__
 of the community.
 
-Luckily enough users of Debian (and its derivatives) who still use
-32bit OS on 64bit capable systems can take advantage of rolled out in
-recently released Wheezy `multiarch
-<http://wiki.debian.org/Multiarch>`_ support.  Multiarch allows to
-install and run multiple user-level builds (e.g. i386 and amd64) on a
-hardware/kernel capable to support both.
+Luckily, users of the fresh Debian stable release *wheezy* (or more recent
+variants of Debian and its derivatives) who still need a 32bit OS on
+64bit-capable hardware can take advantage of the new `multiarch
+<http://wiki.debian.org/Multiarch>`_ support.  Multiarch allows for
+multiple architecturesi to co-exist on a hardware/kernel
+that is capable of supporting both (e.g. i386 and amd64).
 
-Below we describe how you could take advantage of multiarch support
-and in few simple steps prepare your 32bit user-land for running 64bit
-Matlab.
+Below we describe how you can use multiarch support and in few simple steps
+that prepare your existing 32bit user-land for running 64bit Matlab.
 
 
 Procedure
@@ -44,8 +43,8 @@ Procedure
    sudo apt-get install libstdc++6:amd64 zlib1g:amd64 libncurses5:amd64 \
      libxp6:amd64 libstdc++6-4.4-dev:amd64 libxt6:amd64 libxmu6:amd64 libxtst6:amd64
 
-Now your 64bit matlab (which hopefully you "registered" with
-:ref:`matlab-support <binary_pkg_matlab-support>` package) should be ready to run.
+Now your 64bit matlab (which you hopefully "registered" with
+:ref:`matlab-support <binary_pkg_matlab-support>`) is ready to run.
 
 If you have any comments (typos, improvements, etc) -- feel welcome to
 leave a comment below, or `contact us`_ .