Issue 3785:Web:Introduction: Reword "Our Goal" box

The content of this box was somewhat confusing and inconsistent. See
http://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/lilypond-devel/2014-01/msg00011.html

This commit tries to incorporate the suggestions made in this thread
as far as I considered appropriate.

diff --git a/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi b/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
index af0c9f7101a408ac344dc1ec17ad665c9cef2032..9e7265cda9d8296c7c8ca070ffede157cff9c39a 100644 (file)
--- a/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
+++ b/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
@@ -20,10 +20,14 @@ soulless look of computer-printed sheet music.  Musicians prefer
 reading beautiful music, so why couldn't programmers write
 software to produce elegant printed parts?
 
-The result is a system which frees musicians from the details of
-layout, allowing them to focus on making music.  LilyPond works
-with them to create publication-quality parts, crafted in the best
-traditions of classical music engraving.
+The result is a program that creates beautiful sheet music
+following the best traditions of classical music engraving.
+It takes care of the details of layout programmatically,
+allowing composers, transcribers and publishers to focus
+on the @emph{music} instead of improving their software's
+default output.  Performers will get parts that let them
+concentrate on @emph{playing} music instead of @emph{reading} it.
+
 
 @divEnd