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diff --git a/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely b/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely
index a29dd9c4ae..d9c7fb42d4 100644
--- a/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely
+++ b/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ chord.  The chord repetition symbol is @code{q}:
 @end lilypond
 
 As with regular chords, the chord repetition symbol can be used with
-durations, articulations, markups, slurs, beams, etc. as only the
+durations, articulations, markups, slurs, beams, etc., as only the
 pitches of the previous chord are duplicated.
 
 @lilypond[verbatim,quote]
@@ -559,8 +559,8 @@ upstems, and the even-numbered voices are given downstems:
 >>
 @end lilypond
 
-@warning{Lyrics, spanners (such as slurs, ties, hairpins etc.) cannot be
-created @q{across} voices.}
+@warning{Lyrics and spanners (such as slurs, ties, hairpins, etc.) cannot
+be created @q{across} voices.}
 
 @subsubsubheading Identical rhythms
 
@@ -1118,12 +1118,12 @@ started when combining notes that have just started in the other
 @code{Voice}.  This can lead to a number of unexpected issues including
 @qq{Solo} or @qq{Unison} marks being printed incorrectly.
 
-@code{\partcombine} keeps all spanners (slurs, ties, hairpins etc.) in
+@code{\partcombine} keeps all spanners (slurs, ties, hairpins, etc.) in
 the same @code{Voice} so that if any such spanners start or end in a
 different @code{Voice}, they may not be printed properly or at all.
 
 If the @code{\partcombine} function cannot combine both music
-expressions (i.e. when both voices have different durations), it will
+expressions (i.e., when both voices have different durations), it will
 give the voices, internally, its own custom names: @code{one} and
 @code{two} respectively.  This means if there is any @qq{switch} to a
 differently named @code{Voice} context, the events in that differently