From cd650e1dc260717770c3db9bc0d1a02c11f5a6c3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Valentin Villenave <valentin@villenave.net>
Date: Mon, 7 Apr 2008 10:22:07 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Small corrections in Text documentation. I also corrected a
 markup in Trevor B.'s headword.

---
 Documentation/user/text.itely | 19 ++++++-------------
 input/manual/text-headword.ly |  2 +-
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/user/text.itely b/Documentation/user/text.itely
index ee215db057..2eca283eaf 100644
--- a/Documentation/user/text.itely
+++ b/Documentation/user/text.itely
@@ -15,13 +15,10 @@
 
 This section explains how to include text (with various
 formatting) in your scores.
-Some text elements that are not dealt with here are discussed in other
-specific sections:
 
-@itemize
-@item @ref{Vocal music}
-@item @ref{Titles and headers}
-@end itemize
+@noindent
+Some text elements that are not dealt with here are discussed in other
+specific sections: @ref{Vocal music}, @ref{Titles and headers}.
 
 
 @cindex Text, other languages
@@ -54,8 +51,8 @@ information, see @ref{Text encoding}.}
 @cindex text items, non-empty
 @cindex non-empty texts
 
-It is possible to add arbitrary text indications with
-@var{note}@code{-"}@var{text}@code{"}.
+It is possible to add arbitrary text indications
+to a score, as demonstrated in the following example.
 Such indications can also be manually placed
 above or below the staff, using the
 simple syntax described in @ref{Controlling direction and
@@ -220,7 +217,7 @@ c c
 @seealso
 
 Notation Reference: @ref{Rehearsal marks},
-@ref{Formatting text}.
+@ref{Formatting text}, @ref{The Feta font}.
 
 Snippets: @lsrdir{Text,Text}
 
@@ -254,10 +251,6 @@ expression}, and is described in @code{File structure}.
 \markup @{
   @var{..}
 @}
-
-\score @{
-  @var{..}
-@}
 @end example
 
 @noindent
diff --git a/input/manual/text-headword.ly b/input/manual/text-headword.ly
index 7cbc123f3c..6bfcef0bf7 100644
--- a/input/manual/text-headword.ly
+++ b/input/manual/text-headword.ly
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@
       \once \override TextScript #'padding = #2
       af16 \sustainDown
       ^ \markup \italic { non staccato }
-      _ \markup \italic { molto \dynamic p, sempre tranquillo
+      _ \markup \italic { molto \concat {\dynamic {p},} sempre tranquillo
          ed egualmente, non rubato }
       <ef' c'>16
       <ef' c'>16
-- 
2.39.5