From 99ff491ead51f602e1aedc873e6244666a6066b4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Yaroslav Halchenko Date: Thu, 11 Oct 2012 11:52:10 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] brochure -- very minor from native speakers --- artwork/brochure/brochure_debian-neurodebian.tex | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/artwork/brochure/brochure_debian-neurodebian.tex b/artwork/brochure/brochure_debian-neurodebian.tex index d0fce09..3817f00 100644 --- a/artwork/brochure/brochure_debian-neurodebian.tex +++ b/artwork/brochure/brochure_debian-neurodebian.tex @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ \ndsection{Debian} was founded by Ian Murdock in August 1993 with the goal -to create an easy-to-install and maintain non-commercial GNU/Linux +to create an easy to install and maintain non-commercial GNU/Linux operating system that would be able to compete in the commercial market. Since then, Debian established itself as an independent and unique project driven by more than 3000 @@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ a new name -- \emph{wheezy}. Debian is the only major operating system developed solely by volunteer individuals who collaborate via the Internet. Debian developers, teams or individual contributors improve the operating -system not by writing new applications (in most cases), but by +system not by writing new applications (in most cases) but by \begin{itemize}[nolistsep,topsep=0em,leftmargin=1pc] \item integrating existing software into Debian \item fixing and communicating bug reports to original developers -- 2.39.2