From 86c9165e160f731023859aa57292b30f7436ef6f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: James Lowe <pkx166h@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 6 Jan 2012 19:51:29 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Doc: NR Section on Upbeats made clearer

Tracker issue 2189

Created simpler and clearer @lilypond examples.

Used a less complex, more obvious value for \set Timing.measure position
examples and added a specific example after the @knownissue to show
\partial and \set Timing.. being used together (at the beginning and
after the beginning) to help reinforce the point.

Minor cindex changes and linebreak edits as per the CG
---
 Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely | 57 ++++++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 33 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely b/Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely
index c22f55fb52..c26305c9d9 100644
--- a/Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely
+++ b/Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely
@@ -1331,54 +1331,57 @@ Internals Reference:
 @cindex upbeat
 @cindex partial measure
 @cindex measure, partial
+@cindex measure, pickup
 @cindex pickup measure
-@cindex measure, change length
 
 @funindex measurePosition
 @funindex \partial
 @funindex partial
 
-Partial or pick-up measures, such as an anacrusis or upbeat, are
-entered using the @code{\partial} command, with the syntax
+Partial or pick-up measures, such as an @emph{anacrusis} or an
+@emph{upbeat}, are entered using the @code{\partial} command,
 
 @example
 \partial @var{duration}
 @end example
 
 @noindent
-where @code{@var{duration}} is the rhythmic length of the
-remaining interval of the current measure before the start of the
-next.
+where @code{@var{duration}} is the @emph{remaining} length of the
+partial measure @emph{before} the start of the next full measure.
 
-@lilypond[quote,verbatim,relative=2]
-\partial 4 e4 |
-a2. c,4 |
+@lilypond[quote,verbatim,relative=1]
+\time 3/4
+\partial 8
+e8 | a4 c8 b c4 |
 @end lilypond
 
-The partial measure can be any duration less than the full measure:
+The @var{duration} can be any value less than a full measure:
 
-@lilypond[quote,verbatim,relative=2]
-\partial 8*3 c8 d e |
-a2. c,4 |
+@lilypond[quote,verbatim,relative=1]
+\time 3/4
+\partial 4.
+r4 e8 | a4 c8 b c4 |
 @end lilypond
 
-Internally, @code{\partial @var{duration}} is translated into:
+The @code{\partial @var{duration}} can also be written as;
 
 @example
 \set Timing.measurePosition -@var{duration}
 @end example
 
-For example, @code{\partial 8*3} becomes:
+So @code{\partial 8} becomes:
 
-@example
-\set Timing.measurePosition = #(ly:make-moment -3 8)
-@end example
+@lilypond[quote,verbatim,relative=1]
+\time 3/4
+\set Timing.measurePosition = #(ly:make-moment -1 8)
+e8 | a4 c8 b c4 |
+@end lilypond
 
 The property @code{measurePosition} contains a rational number
 indicating how much of the measure has passed at this point.  Note
 that this is set to a negative number by the @code{\partial} command:
-i.e., @code{\partial 4} is internally translated to @w{@code{-4}}, meaning
-@qq{there is a quarter note left in the measure.}
+i.e., @code{\partial 4} is internally translated to @w{@code{-4}},
+meaning @qq{there is a quarter note left in the measure.}
 
 @seealso
 Music Glossary:
@@ -1394,11 +1397,17 @@ Internal Reference:
 @rinternals{Timing_translator}.
 
 @knownissues
+The @code{\partial} command should be used only at the beginning of a
+piece.  If you use it after the beginning, warnings or problems may
+occur, so use @code{\set Timing.measurePosition} instead.
 
-The @code{\partial} command is intended to be used only at the
-beginning of a piece.  If you use it after the beginning, some
-odd warnings or effects may occur, in this case use
-@code{\set Timing.measurePosition} instead.
+@lilypond[quote,verbatim,relative=1]
+\time 6/8
+\partial 8
+e8 | a4 c8 b[ c b] |
+\set Timing.measurePosition = #(ly:make-moment -1 4)
+r8 e,8 | a4 c8 b[ c b] |
+@end lilypond
 
 @node Unmetered music
 @unnumberedsubsubsec Unmetered music
-- 
2.39.5