From 6ad9a4918e11e6b58945bd8da09b0aa2a9fc17ae Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Graham Percival <graham@percival-music.ca>
Date: Mon, 4 Feb 2008 08:37:39 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] Update from Trevor.

---
 Documentation/user/rhythms.itely        | 14 ++++++++++----
 Documentation/user/writing-sections.txt |  3 ++-
 2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/user/rhythms.itely b/Documentation/user/rhythms.itely
index 648e92a296..8947591745 100644
--- a/Documentation/user/rhythms.itely
+++ b/Documentation/user/rhythms.itely
@@ -37,8 +37,9 @@ This section discusses rhythms, durations, and bars.
 @node Durations
 @unnumberedsubsubsec Durations
 
-@cindex duration
-@cindex beams, automatic
+@cindex durations, of notes
+@cindex note durations
+
 @funindex \longa
 @funindex \breve
 @funindex \maxima
@@ -80,6 +81,8 @@ note.
 a a a2 a a4 a a1 a
 @end lilypond
 
+@cindex notes, dotted
+@cindex dotted notes
 
 @funindex .
 
@@ -121,9 +124,11 @@ notation see @ref{Proportional notation}.
 
 @seealso
 
-Music Glossary: @rglos{breve}, @rglos{longa}.
+Music Glossary: @rglos{breve}, @rglos{longa}, @rglos{note value}
+@rglos{Duration names notes and rests}.
 
-Notation Reference:@ref{Automatic beams}, @ref{Ties}, @ref{Writing rests}, @ref{Vocal music},
+Notation Reference: @ref{Automatic beams}, @ref{Ties}, 
+@ref{Writing rhythms}, @ref{Writing rests}, @ref{Vocal music},
 @ref{Ancient notation}, @ref{Proportional notation}.
 
 Snippets: @lsrdir{Rhythms,Rhythms}
@@ -2515,3 +2520,4 @@ Internals Reference: @internalsref{Timing_translator},
 
 
 
+
diff --git a/Documentation/user/writing-sections.txt b/Documentation/user/writing-sections.txt
index 6c7cfaa30f..3a0c767431 100644
--- a/Documentation/user/writing-sections.txt
+++ b/Documentation/user/writing-sections.txt
@@ -25,9 +25,10 @@ I recommend working on one subsection at a time.  For each
 subsection,
 - check the mundane formatting.  Are the headings (@refcommands,
   @seealso, etc) in the right order?
+- add any appropriate index entries.
 - check the links in the @seealso section -- links to music
   glossary, internal references, and other NR sections are the
-  main concern.
+  main concern.  Check for potential additions.
 - move LSR-worthy material into LSR.  Add the snippet (or
   just send it to Valentin for adding), delete the material from
   the .itely file, and add a @lilypondfile command.
-- 
2.39.5