From 410fe169a1eeff173aed62d85b79686532b379ff Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Simon Albrecht Date: Tue, 8 Sep 2015 14:54:56 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 1/1] Doc: NR - Improve wording in 'Changing Spacing' Issue 4589 The paragraph from "Avoid (or reduce)" in spacing.itely used 'for example' twice in a row. The description of the 'volta bracket' issue was unclear in terminology and phrasing. --- Documentation/notation/spacing.itely | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely b/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely index d88fa8b27e..e954e9b9a6 100644 --- a/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely +++ b/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely @@ -3484,11 +3484,11 @@ assignment will force a layout with 2 pages. @item Avoid (or reduce) objects that increase the vertical size of a -system. For example, volta repeats (or alternate repeats) require -extra space. If these repeats are spread over two systems, they -will take up more space than one system with the volta repeats and -another system without. For example, dynamics that @q{stick out} of -a system can be moved closer to the staff: +system. For example, volta brackets for alternative repeat endings +require extra space. If these endings are spread over two systems, +they take up more space than if they were on the same system. +As another example, dynamics that @q{stick out} of a system +can be moved closer to the staff: @lilypond[verbatim,quote] \relative e' { -- 2.39.2