From 2655db10c3bca1a7ee49505a8287a72a95aecc64 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Graham Percival Date: Tue, 1 Sep 2009 03:48:05 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Doc: web: resolve some FIXMEs. --- Documentation/general/introduction.itexi | 44 +++++++++++++----------- 1 file changed, 24 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/general/introduction.itexi b/Documentation/general/introduction.itexi index 76da24be2f..2d627b6f7e 100644 --- a/Documentation/general/introduction.itexi +++ b/Documentation/general/introduction.itexi @@ -446,11 +446,9 @@ scholarships. @divClass{column-center-bottom} @subheading Where now? -Still not convinced? Read about some of our users' -@ref{Productions} and sheet music. If you've already decided to -try LilyPond, first read about our @ref{Text input}. - -FIXME: rewrite for Background. +Still not convinced? Read our extensive essay about our engraving +philosophy in @ref{Background}. If you've already decided to try +LilyPond, first read about our @ref{Text input}. @divEnd @@ -461,14 +459,11 @@ FIXME: rewrite for Background. @subheading Background essay We have an extensive essay describing computational aesthetics: -the art of creating beauty with a computer. FIXME blah blah. - -FIXME: simplify the verbosity below. +the art of creating beauty with a computer. If you just want a quick introduction to LilyPond, the essay might be too much material to read. If you would like to read it now, please progress to @ref{Essay}. - @divEnd @divClass{column-center-bottom} @@ -799,23 +794,16 @@ Some editing environments include syntax highlighting, automatic command completion, and pre-made templates. Other programs actually provide a GUI which allows direct manipulation of a graphical score. For more information, see our documentation -about @@ref@{FIXME alternate editing environments@}. +about @ref{Alternate input}. @divClass{column-center-bottom} @subheading Where now? -You are now ready to @ref{Download, Download LilyPond}. +You are now ready to @ref{Download, Download LilyPond}. Still not +convinced? Read about easier editing environments in +@ref{Alternate input}. -Still not convinced? Many composers, musicians, and conductors -have learned how to write music in our input format. Experienced -users even report that they can enter a full score in LilyPond -faster than with a piano keyboard or mouse+GUI! Perhaps you would -like to review the @ref{Features}, @ref{Examples}, or -@ref{Freedom} that LilyPond provides, or read about users' -@ref{Productions} and @ref{Testimonials}. In addition, our -approach to the computational aesthetics of classical engraving is -explained in our @ref{Background}. FIXME @divEnd @@ -864,7 +852,23 @@ FIXME: insert text and a graphic(s) @divEnd + @divClass{column-center-bottom} +@subheading Where now? + +You are now ready to @ref{Download, Download LilyPond}. + +Still not convinced? Many composers, musicians, and conductors +have learned how to write music in our input format. Experienced +users even report that they can enter a full score in LilyPond +faster than with a piano keyboard or mouse+GUI! Perhaps you would +like to review the @ref{Features}, @ref{Examples}, or the +@ref{Freedom} that LilyPond provides, or read about users' +@ref{Productions} and @ref{Testimonials}. In addition, our +approach to the computational aesthetics of classical engraving is +explained in our @ref{Background}. + + @subheading Legalese @divClass{legal} -- 2.39.5