From: hanwen <hanwen>
Date: Sat, 19 Jul 2003 00:05:13 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: * Documentation/topdocs/AUTHORS.texi (AUTHORS): cleanup.
X-Git-Tag: release/1.7.28~58
X-Git-Url: https://git.donarmstrong.com/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=c9bcabb22d5fd871bc33f5dc389cca77c4f42e58;p=lilypond.git

* Documentation/topdocs/AUTHORS.texi (AUTHORS): cleanup.

* Documentation/user/introduction.itely (Introduction): rewrite
introduction,
(Music notation and  engraving): about notation. Add flat-picture
---

diff --git a/ChangeLog b/ChangeLog
index b17c13f6a1..baf13fab97 100644
--- a/ChangeLog
+++ b/ChangeLog
@@ -1,10 +1,12 @@
 2003-07-19  Han-Wen Nienhuys  <hanwen@cs.uu.nl>
 
+	* Documentation/topdocs/AUTHORS.texi (AUTHORS): cleanup.
+
 	* Documentation/index.texi (Top): cleanup.
 
 	* Documentation/user/introduction.itely (Introduction): rewrite
 	introduction, 
-	(Music notation and  engraving): about notation.
+	(Music notation and  engraving): about notation. Add flat-picture
 
 2003-07-18  Han-Wen Nienhuys  <hanwen@cs.uu.nl>
 
diff --git a/Documentation/topdocs/AUTHORS.texi b/Documentation/topdocs/AUTHORS.texi
index 49a18bb006..c1d1fcd6ea 100644
--- a/Documentation/topdocs/AUTHORS.texi
+++ b/Documentation/topdocs/AUTHORS.texi
@@ -35,8 +35,6 @@ list is alphabetically ordered.
     Debian package: debian/*
 @item  David Gonz@'alez
   Spanish glossary translations.
-@item @email{jlhamm@@pacificnet.net, James Hammons},
-    American chord names, gnu-windows testing
 @item @email{bjoern.jacke@@gmx.de, Bjoern Jacke}
     German glossary stuff.
 @item @email{chris@@fluffhouse.org.uk, Chris Jackson},
@@ -61,9 +59,6 @@ list is alphabetically ordered.
 @item @email{janneke@@gnu.org, Jan Nieuwenhuizen}, 
     @uref{http://www.xs4all.nl/~jantien/}
     Main author (initials: JCN).
-@item @email{oliva@@dcc.unicamp.br, Alexandre Oliva}, 
-    @uref{http://sunsite.unicamp.br/~oliva/}
-    testing
 @item @email{pinard@@iro.umontreal.ca, Francois Pinard},
     @uref{http://www.iro.umontreal.ca/~pinard/}
     parts of Documentation/user/glossary*, started internationalization stuff
diff --git a/Documentation/user/introduction.itely b/Documentation/user/introduction.itely
index 19616e85b2..8bede8cbd8 100644
--- a/Documentation/user/introduction.itely
+++ b/Documentation/user/introduction.itely
@@ -104,16 +104,18 @@ it to harmonize with the thickness of our staff lines.
 
 @ifhtml
 @html
-
+<p>
 <a href=henle-flat-bw.png>
-<img src=henle-flat-bw.png>
+<img width=300 src=henle-flat-bw.png>
 </a>
 
-<a href=baer-flat-bw.png><img width=300 src=baer-flat-bw.png></a>
+<a href=baer-flat-bw.png>
+<img width=300 src=baer-flat-bw.png></a>
 
 <a src=lily-flat-bw.png>
-<img src=lily-flat-bw.png>
-<a/>
+<img width=300 src=lily-flat-bw.png>
+</a>
+<p>
 @end html
 @end ifhtml
 
@@ -333,7 +335,7 @@ LilyPond is a batch program, so the syntax of the program is its
 user-interface.  It is the part that they see most, so it is easy to
 think that music representation is a very important or interesting
 problem. In reality, less than 10% of the source code of the program
-handles reading the input and representation, and they form the easy
+handles reading and representing the input, and they form the easy
 bits of the program. Converting the music to notation, and calculating
 a pretty layout is much more difficult.
 
@@ -342,8 +344,8 @@ a pretty layout is much more difficult.
 
 We have written LilyPond as an experiment of how to condense the art
 of music engraving into a computer program. Thanks to all that hard
-work, the program can be used to perform useful tasks.  The simplest
-application is printing notes.
+work, the program can now be used to perform useful tasks.  The
+simplest application is printing notes.
 
 @lilypond[relative=1]
   \time 2/4 c4 c g'4 g a4 a g2