From: Urs Liska Date: Tue, 7 Jan 2014 11:51:02 +0000 (+0100) Subject: Issue 3785:Web:Introduction: Reword "Our Goal" box X-Git-Tag: release/2.19.1-1~20^2~2 X-Git-Url: https://git.donarmstrong.com/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=b86682d0cd34af40f0436ad97a2659a827a698b5;p=lilypond.git Issue 3785:Web:Introduction: Reword "Our Goal" box The content of this box was somewhat confusing and inconsistent. See http://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/lilypond-devel/2014-01/msg00011.html This commit tries to incorporate the suggestions made in this thread as far as I considered appropriate. --- diff --git a/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi b/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi index af0c9f7101..9e7265cda9 100644 --- a/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi +++ b/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi @@ -20,10 +20,14 @@ soulless look of computer-printed sheet music. Musicians prefer reading beautiful music, so why couldn't programmers write software to produce elegant printed parts? -The result is a system which frees musicians from the details of -layout, allowing them to focus on making music. LilyPond works -with them to create publication-quality parts, crafted in the best -traditions of classical music engraving. +The result is a program that creates beautiful sheet music +following the best traditions of classical music engraving. +It takes care of the details of layout programmatically, +allowing composers, transcribers and publishers to focus +on the @emph{music} instead of improving their software's +default output. Performers will get parts that let them +concentrate on @emph{playing} music instead of @emph{reading} it. + @divEnd