From: Don Armstrong <don@donarmstrong.com>
Date: Sat, 10 May 2025 22:18:36 +0000 (-0700)
Subject: Wordsmith impact
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Wordsmith impact
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 # #+LATEX_CLASS_OPTIONS: [10pt,breaklinks]
 
 * Experience
-** Career Synopsis & Outlook \hfill Ready to be your Sr. Director of Data
+** Career Synopsis & Outlook \hfill Leadership to realize the value of your organization's data
 + A proven, transformative leader of teams that enable businesses to
   harness the value of scientific and business data to achieve
   business goals in biotechnology and other biology-adjacent
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
   challenging stakeholders and earning their trust and buy-in even in
   complex, highly regulated environments.
 + Seeking opportunities to grow, lead, and transform organizations
-  with larger scope and impact.
+  with a larger scope and greater impact.
 ** Director of Data Science and Analytics at Ginkgo Bioworks \hfill 2022--Present 
 + Directed a geographically distributed team of managers who lead
   teams of data engineers, system administrators, statisticians,