From: gpercival <gpercival>
Date: Tue, 16 Aug 2005 00:33:28 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Minor changes.
X-Git-Tag: release/2.6.4~17^2~73
X-Git-Url: https://git.donarmstrong.com/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=4c810642c906d222fa7a1a7cf5ac159f8c1d6801;p=lilypond.git

Minor changes.
---

diff --git a/Documentation/user/instrument-notation.itely b/Documentation/user/instrument-notation.itely
index a047bc12ac..65e5a63055 100644
--- a/Documentation/user/instrument-notation.itely
+++ b/Documentation/user/instrument-notation.itely
@@ -1940,7 +1940,7 @@ music.
 This is what the well known tune Amazing Grace looks like in bagpipe
 notation.
 
-@lilypond[raggedright,verbatim,quote]
+@lilypond[verbatim,quote]
 \include "bagpipe.ly"
 \layout {
   indent = 0.0\cm
diff --git a/Documentation/user/putting.itely b/Documentation/user/putting.itely
index 4b9682f371..fb276a1b2a 100644
--- a/Documentation/user/putting.itely
+++ b/Documentation/user/putting.itely
@@ -272,8 +272,9 @@ e4^\markup{ \italic ritenuto } g b e
 @end lilypond
 
 That looks better, but it isn't quite big enough.  After experimenting
-with a few values, I think 2.3 is the best number.  I leave this as an
-exercise for the reader.
+with a few values, we think 2.3 is the best number.  We leave this as an
+exercise for the reader to modify the above example and view the output
+for themselves.
 
 @cindex extra-offset
 
@@ -291,8 +292,8 @@ e4^\markup{ \italic ritenuto } g b e
 
 With @code{extra-offset}, the first number controls the horizontal
 movement (left is negative); the second number controls the vertial
-movement (up is positive).  After a bit of experimenting, I decided
-that these values look good
+movement (up is positive).  After a bit of experimenting, we decided
+that these values look good.
 
 @lilypond[quote,fragment,raggedright,verbatim,relative=2]
 \once \override TextScript #'extra-offset = #'( -1.6 . 1.0 )