From: Russ Allbery <rra@debian.org>
Date: Wed, 21 Jul 2010 22:05:45 +0000 (-0700)
Subject: Really fix the pre-depends wording
X-Git-Url: https://git.donarmstrong.com/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=113f8206b378c5de2b9bef38f605358cb585d85b;p=debian%2Fdebian-policy.git

Really fix the pre-depends wording

Based on feedback from Ben Finney.
---

diff --git a/policy.sgml b/policy.sgml
index eb458fe..b16484e 100644
--- a/policy.sgml
+++ b/policy.sgml
@@ -1079,9 +1079,9 @@
 	</p>
 
 	<p>
-	  Sometimes, a package requires another package to be unpacked
-	  <em>and</em> configured before it can be unpacked.  In this
-	  case, the dependent package must specify this dependency in
+	  Sometimes, unpacking one package requires that another package
+	  be first unpacked <em>and</em> configured.  In this case, the
+	  dependent package must specify this dependency in
 	  the <tt>Pre-Depends</tt> control field.
 	</p>