From: Graham Percival <graham@percival-music.ca>
Date: Sun, 29 Jun 2008 13:17:18 +0000 (-0700)
Subject: More LM 1 fixes.
X-Git-Tag: release/2.11.50-1~13
X-Git-Url: https://git.donarmstrong.com/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=0326792af0672a4b97c3c38c2b39d2605c1d8ac4;p=lilypond.git

More LM 1 fixes.
---

diff --git a/Documentation/user/introduction.itely b/Documentation/user/introduction.itely
index 879417a4ef..3062236c1c 100644
--- a/Documentation/user/introduction.itely
+++ b/Documentation/user/introduction.itely
@@ -613,6 +613,8 @@ Chords can be constructed with @code{<<} and @code{>>} enclosing the notes
 @c < > is not a music expression,
 @c so we use <<>> iso. <> to drive home the point of
 @c expressions.  Don't change this back --hwn.
+
+@c FIXME: change this.  I can explain it better.  -gp
 @example
 <<c4 d4 e4>>
 @end example
@@ -740,6 +742,10 @@ chapters in a linear fashion.
 
 @itemize
 
+@item
+@ref{Introduction}: explains the background and overall goal of
+LilyPond.
+
 @item
 @ref{Tutorial}: gives a gentle introduction to typesetting music.
 First time users should start here.
@@ -819,7 +825,8 @@ particular instrument (or vocal) groups.
 
 @item
 @ruser{Input syntax}:
-
+discusses general information about LilyPond files and controlling
+output.
 
 @item
 @ruser{Spacing issues}:
@@ -828,6 +835,8 @@ paper size or specifying page breaks.
 
 @item
 @ruser{Changing defaults}:
+explains how to tweak LilyPond to produce exactly the notation you
+want.
 
 @item
 @ruser{Interfaces for programmers}:
@@ -909,7 +918,9 @@ formats to the @code{.ly} format.
 @cindex snippets
 @cindex LSR
 
-The Snippet List shows a selected set of LilyPond snippets from the
+@c FIXME: check on kainhofer.
+@rlsr{LilyPond Snippet List}: this shows a selected set of
+LilyPond snippets from the
 @uref{http://lsr@/.dsi@/.unimi@/.it,LilyPond Snippet Repository}
 (LSR).  It is in the public domain.
 
@@ -922,25 +933,11 @@ source tree.
 The list of snippets for each subsection of the Notation Reference
 (NR) are also linked from the @strong{See also} portion.
 
-@itemize
-@item
-The
-@ifhtml
-@uref{source/input/lsr/lilypond-snippets/index.html,Snippets}
-@end ifhtml
-@ifnothtml
-Snippets
-@end ifnothtml
-are a great collection of short examples which demonstrate tricks, tips,
-and special features of LilyPond.  Most of these snippets can also be
-found in the @uref{http://lsr.dsi.unimi.it/,LilyPond Snippet
-Repository}.  This website also has a searchable LilyPond manual.
-@end itemize
-
 
 @node About the Internals Reference (IR)
 @unnumberedsubsec About the Internals Reference (IR)
 
+@c zzz
 
 @itemize
 @item
diff --git a/input/lsr/lilypond-snippets.tely b/input/lsr/lilypond-snippets.tely
index 4ef18ee33b..70ca9edf1b 100644
--- a/input/lsr/lilypond-snippets.tely
+++ b/input/lsr/lilypond-snippets.tely
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ or figure for each example to see the corresponding input file.
 
 @ifnottex
 @node Top
-@top LilyPond examples
+@top LilyPond Snippet List
 
 This document shows a selected set of LilyPond snippets from the
 @uref{http://lsr@/.dsi@/.unimi@/.it,LilyPond Snippet Repository}