Update from Jay, thanks!

diff --git a/Documentation/user/editorial.itely b/Documentation/user/editorial.itely
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--- a/Documentation/user/editorial.itely
+++ b/Documentation/user/editorial.itely
@@ -110,23 +110,22 @@ Internals Reference: @internalsref{font-interface}.
 @cindex finger change
 
 Fingering instructions can be entered using
+@var{note}-@var{digit}:
 
-@example
-@var{note}-@var{digit}
-@end example
+@lilypond[quote,verbatim,ragged-right,fragment,relative=2]
+c4-1 d-2 f-4 e-3
+@end lilypond
 
-For finger changes, use markup texts
+Use markup texts for finger changes. 
 
-@lilypond[quote,verbatim,ragged-right,fragment,relative=1]
-c4-1 c-2 c-3 c-4
-c^\markup { \finger "2 - 3" }
+@lilypond[quote,verbatim,ragged-right,fragment,relative=2]
+c4-1 d-2 f-4 c^\markup { \finger "2 - 3" }
 @end lilypond
 
 @cindex thumb-script
 
-
-You can use the thumb-script to indicate that a note should be
-played with the thumb (e.g., in cello music)
+You can use the thumb-script (e.g., in cello music)to indicate that a 
+note should be played with the thumb. 
 
 @lilypond[quote,verbatim,ragged-right,fragment,relative=2]
 <a_\thumb a'-3>8 <b_\thumb b'-3>
@@ -136,34 +135,33 @@ played with the thumb (e.g., in cello music)
 @cindex chords, fingering
 
 Fingerings for chords can also be added to individual notes of the
-chord by adding them after the pitches
+chord by adding them after the pitches.
 
 @lilypond[quote,verbatim,ragged-right,fragment,relative=2]
-< c-1 e-2 g-3 b-5 >4
+< c-1 e-2 g-3 b-5 >2 < d-1 f-2 a-3 c-5 >
 @end lilypond
 
 
 @commonprop
 
-You may exercise greater control over fingering chords by setting
-@code{fingeringOrientations}
+@code{fingeringOrientations} are used to control where the fingering
+numbers are placed.
 
-@lilypond[quote,verbatim,ragged-right,fragment,relative=1]
+@lilypond[quote,verbatim,ragged-right,fragment,relative=2]
+\set fingeringOrientations = #'(left)
+<c-1 e-3 a-5 > 4
+\set fingeringOrientations = #'(down)
+<c-1 e-3 a-5 > 
+\set fingeringOrientations = #'(right)
+<c-1 e-3 a-5 > 
+\set fingeringOrientations = #'(up)
+<c-1 e-3 a-5 > 
 \set fingeringOrientations = #'(left down)
-<c-1 es-2 g-4 bes-5 > 4
+<c-1 e-3 a-5 > 2
 \set fingeringOrientations = #'(up right down)
-<c-1 es-2 g-4 bes-5 > 4
-@end lilypond
-
-Using this feature, it is also possible to put fingering
-instructions very close to note heads in monophonic music,
-
-@lilypond[verbatim,ragged-right,quote,fragment]
-\set fingeringOrientations = #'(right)
-<es'-2>4
+<c-1 e-3 a-5 >
 @end lilypond
 
-
 @seealso
 
 Snippets: @lsrdir{Editorial,Editorial-annotations}.