Few rewordings, shortening

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@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ Installation
 Virtual Machine
 ---------------
 
-If your are not running a Debian_ on a particular machine a :ref:`chap_vm` is
+If your are not running Debian_ on a particular machine a :ref:`chap_vm` is
 provided as a convenient testing and evaluation environment.  After a
 few simple steps to setup the virtual machine, you will be able to use
 NeuroDebian_ as an integral part of your existing working
@@ -166,19 +166,19 @@ The Team
 
 Our main goal is to provide neuroscience FOSS for Debian_. Thus the
 whole project would not be possible without the work of over 3,000
-Debian_ developers and contributors who are as enthusiastically share
-our goal.  To provide our share -- Debian_ packages of FOSS for
-neuroscience research -- `Experimental Psychology Debian packaging
+Debian_ developers and contributors who are enthusiastically share
+our goal.  To add our share -- Debian_ packages of FOSS for
+neuroscience research -- the `Experimental Psychology Debian packaging
 project <http://alioth.debian.org/projects/pkg-exppsy>`_ was created
 to formally join the forces of
 
 * `Michael Hanke <http://mih.voxindeserto.de>`_
 * `Yaroslav Halchenko <http://www.onerussian.com>`_
 
-Some packages provided within NeuroDebian repository were not packaged
+Some packages provided within the NeuroDebian repository were not packaged
 by our team, but were provided by similar Debian teams.  Therefore we
 want to express particular gratitude to `Debian Med`_ and `Debian
-Science`_ teams for making our job easier.
+Science`_ teams for making their efforts.
 
 
 Contacts

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 Spread The Word
 ===============
 
-Are you relying on a software packaged by |team| which is part of the
-main Debian_ distribution?  Or may be you are relying on the
-NeuroDebian |repos|?  Do you think that our efforts to make
-neuroscience FOSS readily available were worthwhile and you think that
-"it is the way to go"?  If so, it would benefit you, our project, and
-even the entire neuroscience community if more people become aware of
-Debian_ and NeuroDebian_ in particular.  Sharing your positive
-experience with your friends and/or colleagues could be one of the
-ways, alternatively you could...
+Are you relying on a particular software packaged by |team| that is part
+of the main Debian_ distribution?  Or do you rely on the NeuroDebian
+|repos|?  If you think that this project is useful, please help us to
+make more people aware of Debian_ and NeuroDebian_ in particular.
+Sharing your positive experience with your friends and/or colleagues
+is one possibility. Alternatively you could...
 
 
 Rate or review
 --------------
 
-NeuroDebian_ is `present on NITRC portal
+NeuroDebian_ is `listed on the NITRC portal
 <http://www.nitrc.org/projects/neurodebian/>`_.  We would greatly
-appreciate if you rate or express you opinion and/or gratitude in a
-review (see "Reviews & Ratings").
+appreciate if you rate it or express you opinion in a review (see
+"Reviews & Ratings").
 
 
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