Wordsmith impact

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 * Experience
-** Career Synopsis & Outlook \hfill Ready to be your Sr. Director of Data
+** Career Synopsis & Outlook \hfill Leadership to realize the value of your organization's data
 + A proven, transformative leader of teams that enable businesses to
   harness the value of scientific and business data to achieve
   business goals in biotechnology and other biology-adjacent
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   challenging stakeholders and earning their trust and buy-in even in
   complex, highly regulated environments.
 + Seeking opportunities to grow, lead, and transform organizations
-  with larger scope and impact.
+  with a larger scope and greater impact.
 ** Director of Data Science and Analytics at Ginkgo Bioworks \hfill 2022--Present 
 + Directed a geographically distributed team of managers who lead
   teams of data engineers, system administrators, statisticians,