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@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ unpleasant to play from.
 The images below illustrate the difference between traditional
 engraving and typical computer output, and the third picture shows how
 LilyPond mimics the traditional look.  The left picture shows a scan
-of a flat symbol from a Henle edition published in 2000.  The center
+of a flat symbol from an edition published in 2000.  The center
 depicts a symbol from a hand-engraved B@"{a}renreiter edition of the
 same music.  The left scan illustrates typical flaws of computer
 print: the staff lines are thin, the weight of the flat symbol matches
@@ -51,7 +51,8 @@ the light lines and it has a straight layout with sharp corners.  By
 contrast, the B@"{a}renreiter flat has a bold, almost voluptuous
 rounded look.  Our flat symbol is designed after, among others, this
 one.  It is rounded, and its weight harmonizes with the thickness of
-our staff lines, which are also much thicker than Henle's lines.
+our staff lines, which are also much thicker than lines in the
+computer edition.
 
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