De-gender the last few places.

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        * Documentation/user/music-glossary.tely: de-gender a few entires.
 
+       * Documentation/user/introduction.itely: de-gender a few sentences.
+
 2004-09-13  Mats Bengtsson  <mabe@drongo.s3.kth.se>
 
        * input/regression/rehearsal-mark-number.ly: Reuse the existing

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@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@ inked, the depressions caused by the cutting and stamping would hold
 ink.  An image was formed by pressing paper to the plate.  The
 stamping and cutting was completely done by hand.  Making a correction
 was cumbersome, if possible at all, so the engraving had to be perfect
-in one go.  Engraving was a highly specialized skill, a craftsman had
-to complete around five years of training before she could
-be a master engraver, and another five years of experience were
+in one go.  Engraving was a highly specialized skill; a craftsman had
+to complete around five years of training before earning the title of
+master engraver, and another five years of experience were
 necessary to become truly skilled.
 
 Nowadays, all newly printed music is produced with computers.  This
@@ -142,8 +142,8 @@ may seem academical.  But it is not.  In larger pieces with monotonous
 rhythms, spacing corrections lead to subtle variations in the layout
 of every line, giving each one a distinct visual signature.  Without
 this signature all lines would look the same, and they become like a
-labyrinth.  If the musician looks away once or has a lapse in her
-concentration, she will have lost her place on the page.
+labyrinth.  If a musician looks away once or has a lapse in
+concentration, they might lose their place on the page.
 
 Similarly, the strong visual look of bold symbols on heavy staff lines
 stands out better when music is far away from reader, for example, if