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+2003-07-05  Jan Nieuwenhuizen  <janneke@gnu.org>
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+       * Documentation/user/tutorial.itely: Edit introduction.
+
 2003-07-05  Han-Wen Nienhuys  <hanwen@cs.uu.nl>
 
        * lily/staff-symbol-referencer.cc (LY_DEFINE): add

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 * Integrating text and music::  Integrating text and music
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-Operating is done through text files: To print a piece of music, you
-enter the music in a file.  When LilyPond is run (normally using the
-program @code{ly2dvi}) on that file, another file containing formatted
-sheet music, is produced. That file may be printed or viewed.
-
-This tutorial starts with a small introduction to the LilyPond music
-language.  After this first contact, we will show which commands to
-run to produce printed output, so you should then be able to create
-your first sheets of music.  When starting out, it will be convenient
-to print out
+Printing music with LilyPond is a two step process.  First, the music
+to be printed is described in a text file.  After that, LilyPond reads
+this @emph{input file} that describes the music and produces an
+@emph{output file} that can be printed or viewed.
+
+This tutorial starts with a short introduction to the LilyPond music
+language.  After this first contact, we will show you how to to
+produce printed output, normally using the program @code{ly2dvi}.  You
+should then be able to create and print your first sheets of music.
+Before starting out, it will be convenient for you to print
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-@ref{Cheat sheet}, which is a table listing all commands for
-convenient reference.
+@ref{Cheat sheet}, which is a table listing all commands for quick
+reference.