Docs: NR 2.2.4 Harp: Minor fixes

diff --git a/Documentation/user/keyboards.itely b/Documentation/user/keyboards.itely
index d612d0e6d3e869823b82bf4e7360a5646b853ad9..82b097dca4a24210893b4692a61da434ed3a05af 100644 (file)
--- a/Documentation/user/keyboards.itely
+++ b/Documentation/user/keyboards.itely
@@ -561,8 +561,13 @@ Snippets:
 @node Harp
 @subsection Harp
 
-@node Harp Notation
-@unnumberedsubsubsection Harp Notation
+@menu
+* Harp notation::
+* Harp pedals::
+@end menu
+
+@node Harp notation
+@unnumberedsubsubsec Harp notation
 
 TBC
 
@@ -582,20 +587,20 @@ case of glissandi, it would be desirable to have a demonstration
 of different styles.
 @end ignore
 
-@node Harp Pedals
-@unnumberedsubsubsection Harp Pedals
+@node Harp pedals
+@unnumberedsubsubsec Harp pedals
 
 @cindex harp pedals
 @cindex harp pedal diagrams
 @cindex pedals, harp
 @cindex pedal diagrams, harp
 
-Harp have seven strings per ocatve that may be sound the natural,
+Harps have seven strings per octave that may be sounded at the natural,
 flattened, or sharpened pitch. In lever harps, each string is adjusted
 individually, but in pedal harps every string with the same pitch name
 is controlled by a single pedal. From the player's left to right, the
 pedals are D, C, and B on the left and E, F, G, and A on the right.
-The position of the pedals may be indicated with text marks
+The position of the pedals may be indicated with text marks:
 
 @lilypond[quote,verbatim,relative=2]
 \textLengthOn
@@ -614,8 +619,8 @@ c!1_\markup { \harp-pedal #"^o--|vv-^" }
 The @code{\harp-pedal} command accepts a string of characters, where
 @code{^} is the highest pedal position (flattened pitch), @code{-} is
 the middle pedal postion (natural pitch), @code{v} is the lowest pedal
-position (sharpened pitch), and @code{|} is the divider. An @code{o}
-will circle a particular pedal symbol.
+position (sharpened pitch), and @code{|} is the divider. A prefixed
+@code{o} will circle the following pedal symbol.
 
 @seealso
 Notation Reference: