Proofreading for tutorial; thanks Mats.

diff --git a/Documentation/user/tutorial.itely b/Documentation/user/tutorial.itely
index 486e3781ee6502046e2a6eca2efd63664c42ac22..c0f622f7897c50bce49b446a8009d6a06b470c21 100644 (file)
--- a/Documentation/user/tutorial.itely
+++ b/Documentation/user/tutorial.itely
@@ -48,12 +48,14 @@ picture in the HTML version of this manual, you will see the exact
 LilyPond input that was used to generate that image.
 Try it on this image
 
 LilyPond input that was used to generate that image.
 Try it on this image
 

-@lilypond[fragment,quote,ragged-right,relative=2]
-c-\markup { \bold \huge { Click here.  } }
+@c no verbatim here
+@lilypond[quote,ragged-right]
+\relative c'' {
+  c-\markup { \bold \huge { Click here.  } }
+}

 @end lilypond
 
 @end lilypond
 

-By cutting and pasting everything from the @qq{Start cut-&-pastable-section}
-to the end of the file, you have a
+By cutting and pasting everything in the @qq{ly snippet} section, you have a

 starting template for experiments.  If you like learning in this way,
 you will probably want to print out or bookmark the
 @ref{Cheat sheet}, which is a table listing of the most common
 starting template for experiments.  If you like learning in this way,
 you will probably want to print out or bookmark the
 @ref{Cheat sheet}, which is a table listing of the most common


@@ -98,6 +100,7 @@ notation.  For example, if we write
 @noindent
 the result looks like this
 
 @noindent
 the result looks like this
 

+@c  in this case we don't want verbatim

 @lilypond[quote,ragged-right]
 {
   c' e' g' e'
 @lilypond[quote,ragged-right]
 {
   c' e' g' e'


@@ -105,7 +108,7 @@ the result looks like this
 @end lilypond
 
 @strong{Warning:} Every piece of LilyPond input needs to have @strong{@{ curly
 @end lilypond
 
 @strong{Warning:} Every piece of LilyPond input needs to have @strong{@{ curly

-braces @}} placed around the input.  The braces should be also be
+braces @}} placed around the input.  The braces should also be

 surrounded by a space unless they are at the beginning or end of a
 line to avoid ambiguities.  These may be omitted in some examples in this
 manual, but don't forget them in your own music!
 surrounded by a space unless they are at the beginning or end of a
 line to avoid ambiguities.  These may be omitted in some examples in this
 manual, but don't forget them in your own music!


@@ -198,7 +201,7 @@ Converting to `test.pdf'...
 @noindent
 The result is the file @file{test.pdf} which you can print or view
 with the standard facilities of your operating system.@footnote{If
 @noindent
 The result is the file @file{test.pdf} which you can print or view
 with the standard facilities of your operating system.@footnote{If

-your system does not have any tools installed, you can try
+your system does not have any such tools installed, you can try

 @uref{http://@/www@/.cs@/.wisc@/.edu/@/~ghost/,Ghostscript}, a freely
 available package for viewing and printing PDF and PostScript files.}
 
 @uref{http://@/www@/.cs@/.wisc@/.edu/@/~ghost/,Ghostscript}, a freely
 available package for viewing and printing PDF and PostScript files.}