X-Git-Url: https://git.donarmstrong.com/?a=blobdiff_plain;f=ly%2FWelcome_to_LilyPond.ly;h=f90f3bce9f5e121032389df1f06096e34d5739bb;hb=9a2ffbf058002a6a82acc5748a2998840885afb8;hp=f2ae9ab3d3c3fac53d58c2e7ac1f3c64f06be8ee;hpb=d232ec8f99f1bcdf4781119ba28fc94a24a1e8db;p=lilypond.git

diff --git a/ly/Welcome_to_LilyPond.ly b/ly/Welcome_to_LilyPond.ly
index f2ae9ab3d3..f90f3bce9f 100644
--- a/ly/Welcome_to_LilyPond.ly
+++ b/ly/Welcome_to_LilyPond.ly
@@ -6,26 +6,40 @@ Congratulations, LilyPond has been installed successfully.
 
 Now to take it for the first test run.
 
-  1. Safe this LilyPond file on your desktop.
+  1. Save this LilyPond file on your desktop with the name "test.ly".
 
   2. Pick it up from the desktop with your mouse pointer, drag and drop
-     it onto the LilyPond LSD program.
+     it onto the LilyPond icon.
 
   3. LilyPond automatically produces a PDF file from the musical scale
      below.
 
-  4. To print or view the result, click on the newly produced file called
+  4. To print or view the result, click on the newly produced file
+     called
 
-        Welcome_to_LilyPond.PDF
+        test.pdf
 
+  5. If you see a piece of music with a scale, LilyPond is working properly.
+
+Next, you'll want to get started on your own scores.  To do this you'll 
+  need to learn about using LilyPond.
+
+LilyPond's interface is text-based, rather than graphical. Please visit the
+  help page at http://lilypond.org/web/help.  This will point you to a quick
+  tutorial and extensive documentation.
+
+Good luck with LilyPond!  Happy engraving.
 
-That's it.  For more information, visit http://lilypond.org .
 %}
 
+\version "2.14.0"  % necessary for upgrading to future LilyPond versions.
+
 \header{
   title = "A scale in LilyPond"
+  subtitle = "For more information on using LilyPond, please see
+http://lilypond.org/web/help/"
 }
 
-\relative{
+\relative c' {
   c d e f g a b c
 }