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diff --git a/Documentation/user/lilypond-learning.tely b/Documentation/user/lilypond-learning.tely
index fe36740aff..ff254024fc 100644
--- a/Documentation/user/lilypond-learning.tely
+++ b/Documentation/user/lilypond-learning.tely
@@ -10,6 +10,8 @@
 @documentencoding UTF-8
 @documentlanguage en
 
+@include macros.itexi
+
 @iftex
 @afourpaper
 @c don't replace quotes with directed quotes
@@ -23,7 +25,7 @@
 @c don't remove this comment.
 @ignore
 @omfcreator Han-Wen Nienhuys, Jan Nieuwenhuizen and Graham Percival
-@omfdescription User manual of the LilyPond music engraving system
+@omfdescription Learning Manual of the LilyPond music engraving system
 @omftype program usage
 @omfcategory Applications|Publishing
 @omflanguage English
@@ -64,21 +66,7 @@ Free Documentation License''.
 
 @vskip 20pt
 
-@lilypond[ragged-right]
-\score {
-  \context Lyrics {
-    \override Score.RehearsalMark #'self-alignment-X = #LEFT
-    \override Score.RehearsalMark #'font-size = #-2
-    \mark #(ly:export (string-append
-      "(For LilyPond version " (lilypond-version) ")"))
-    s2
-  }
-  \layout {
-    indent = 0.0\pt
-  }
-}
-@end lilypond
-
+For LilyPond version @version{}
 @end titlepage
 
 @copying
@@ -112,12 +100,8 @@ Free Documentation License''.
 @ifnottex
 @node Top
 @top GNU LilyPond --- learning manual
-@c HJJ: Info needs `@top', which is a synonym for `@unnumbered' in TeX.
 
-This is the learning manual for GNU LilyPond 2.11.x series.
-@ifhtml
-(See the bottom of this page for the exact version number).
-@end ifhtml
+This is the learning manual for GNU LilyPond version @version{}.
 
 @cindex web site
 @cindex URL
@@ -130,9 +114,9 @@ of this and other documentation.
 * Preface::                        Preface.
 * Introduction::                   What, Why, How.
 * Tutorial::                       A tutorial introduction.
-* Putting it all together::        More explanation about LilyPond concepts.
-* Working on LilyPond projects::   Discusses real-life usage.
+* Fundamental concepts::           Basic concepts required for reading the rest of this manual.
 * Tweaking output::                Introduction to modifying output.
+* Working on LilyPond projects::   Discusses real-life usage.
 
 Appendices
 
@@ -146,15 +130,12 @@ Appendices
 @contents
 
 
-@include macros.itexi
-
 @include preface.itely
 @include introduction.itely
 @include tutorial.itely
 @include fundamental.itely
-@include putting.itely
-@include working.itely
 @include tweaks.itely
+@include working.itely
 
 @include templates.itely
 @include scheme-tutorial.itely