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diff --git a/Documentation/snippets/broken-crescendo-hairpin.ly b/Documentation/snippets/broken-crescendo-hairpin.ly
index 1515b52fa3..8272553331 100644
--- a/Documentation/snippets/broken-crescendo-hairpin.ly
+++ b/Documentation/snippets/broken-crescendo-hairpin.ly
@@ -1,11 +1,10 @@
-% DO NOT EDIT this file manually; it is automatically
-% generated from Documentation/snippets/new
-% Make any changes in Documentation/snippets/new/
-% and then run scripts/auxiliar/makelsr.py
-%
-% This file is in the public domain.
-%% Note: this file works from version 2.19.2
-\version "2.19.2"
+%% DO NOT EDIT this file manually; it is automatically
+%% generated from LSR http://lsr.di.unimi.it
+%% Make any changes in LSR itself, or in Documentation/snippets/new/ ,
+%% and then run scripts/auxiliar/makelsr.py
+%%
+%% This file is in the public domain.
+\version "2.18.0"
 
 \header {
   lsrtags = "contemporary-notation, expressive-marks, symbols-and-glyphs"
@@ -13,21 +12,21 @@
   texidoc = "
 In order to make parts of a crescendo hairpin invisible, the following
 method is used: A white rectangle is drawn on top of the respective
-part of the crescendo hairpin, making it invisible.
+part of the crescendo hairpin, making it invisible.  The rectangle is
+defined as postscript code within a text markup.
 
-The markup command @code{with-dimensions} tells LilyPond to consider only
-the bottom edge of the rectangle when spacing it against the hairpin.
-The property @code{staff-padding} prevents the rectangle from fitting
-between the hairpin and staff.
+The markup command @code{with-dimensions} tells LilyPond to consider
+only the bottom edge of the rectangle when spacing it against the
+hairpin. The property @code{staff-padding} prevents the rectangle from
+fitting between the hairpin and staff.
 
-Make sure to put the hairpin in a lower layer than the text markup to
-draw the rectangle over the hairpin.
+Make sure the hairpin is in a lower layer than the text markup to draw
+the rectangle over the hairpin.
 
 "
   doctitle = "Broken Crescendo Hairpin"
 } % begin verbatim
 
-
 \relative c' {
   <<
     {
@@ -44,7 +43,7 @@ draw the rectangle over the hairpin.
       des16_\markup \with-dimensions #'(2 . 7) #'(0 . 0)
                     \with-color #white
                     \filled-box #'(2 . 7) #'(0 . 2) #0
-      r8. des4 ~ 16->\sff
+      r8. des4 ~ des16->\sff r8.
     }
   >>
 }