X-Git-Url: https://git.donarmstrong.com/lilypond.git?a=blobdiff_plain;f=ly%2FWelcome_to_LilyPond.ly;h=6d65df2be75b6141f6ac51e2bd8e3cf9fee24bfe;hb=5454d84ac08b7e22ee351fb16a8136d662e6cb4f;hp=bfe7231ee08c7759c32a4f78abda0b1e50faa4bf;hpb=3bafaae8bf353619d2f97036e874f1c9cb787adf;p=lilypond.git

diff --git a/ly/Welcome_to_LilyPond.ly b/ly/Welcome_to_LilyPond.ly
index bfe7231ee0..6d65df2be7 100644
--- a/ly/Welcome_to_LilyPond.ly
+++ b/ly/Welcome_to_LilyPond.ly
@@ -17,22 +17,29 @@ Now to take it for the first test run.
   4. To print or view the result, click on the newly produced file
      called
 
-        test.PDF
+        test.pdf
 
+  5. If you see a piece of music with a scale, LilyPond is working properly.
 
-That's it.
+Next, you'll want to get started on your own scores.  To do this you'll 
+  need to learn about using LilyPond.
 
-LilyPond's interface is text-based. Please read the documentation.
+LilyPond's interface is text-based, rather than graphical. Please visit the
+  help page at http://lilypond.org/introduction.html.  This will
+  point you to a quick tutorial and extensive documentation.
+
+Good luck with LilyPond!  Happy engraving.
 
-For more information, visit http://lilypond.org .
 %}
 
-\version "2.12.0"  % necessary for upgrading to future LilyPond versions.
+\version "2.19.42"  % necessary for upgrading to future LilyPond versions.
 
 \header{
   title = "A scale in LilyPond"
+  subtitle = "For more information on using LilyPond, please see
+http://lilypond.org/introduction.html"
 }
 
-\relative c' {
-  c d e f g a b c
+\relative {
+  c' d e f g a b c
 }