Doc: CG - Minor typos and corrections

[lilypond.git] / Documentation / contributor / quick-start.itexi

diff --git a/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi b/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
index de89c5edd189f7cae3a6eae2f124b5af6965f453..9d8018692ee6a01a67666639ef404aac135e6e99 100644 (file)
--- a/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
+++ b/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ LilyPond, the documentation and the website (also see
 @warning{LilyDev does not include the software for the Grand Unified
 Builder -- also see @ref{Grand Unified Builder (GUB)}.}
 
-While compiling LilyPond on MacOs and Windows is possible, both
+While compiling LilyPond on Mac OS and Windows is possible, both
 environments are complex to set up.  LilyDev can be easily installed
 and run inside a @q{virtual machine} on either of these operating
 systems relatively easily using readily available virtualization
@@ -39,12 +39,12 @@ The LilyDev disk image can also be written to a USB device or @q{burnt}
 to a DVD -- it is approximately 900 MB in size -- and installed just
 like any standard GNU/Linux distribution.
 
-The current image is based on a 32bit version of Debian 8 (@q{Jessie})
-and the Disk image was generated using Debian
+The current image is based on a 32-bit version of Debian 8 (@q{Jessie})
+and the disk image was generated using Debian
 @uref{http://live.debian.net/, live-build 4}.
 
 @noindent
-Download the LilyDev disk image file from here:
+Download the LilyDev disk image file (a @code{.iso} file) from here:
 
 @example
 @uref{https://github.com/fedelibre/LilyDev/releases/latest}
@@ -124,8 +124,8 @@ Your new guest will be displayed in the VirtualBox window.
 @item
 Click the @q{Start} button and the @q{First Run Wizard} will prompt you
 for the installation media.  Click the browse icon, locate the LilyDev
-disk image and click through the wizard to begin the installation
-process.
+disk image file that you downloaded (the @code{.iso} file) and click
+through the wizard to begin the installation process.
 
 @item
 When the LilyDev disk image boots for the first time, choose either the
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ directory and the entire source code will start to be downloaded into
 it.
 
 @warning{Be patient! There is no progress bar in the lily-git UI but the
-complete source is around 180@tie{}Mb.}
+complete source is around 180@tie{}MB.}
 
 @noindent
 When the source code has been downloaded, the @qq{command output} window